Mackenzi's ePortfolio

17.11.16 WALT describe our feelings about camp. All the year five students went on camp. We went to Woodend christian camp. Camp was brilliant because the water slide was really fun and you got to verse someone when you went down the water-slide.            When you went down it was very steep then when you hit the middle and you get splashed and then when you are at the end there is a little mud puddle. At the end I liked it because I got to race my friends and see who was the fastest. I liked all the other activities like archery because at the start I did not know what hand I was but then I got the hang of it.           Shooting was fun because I got one of the triangles. Go karts was fun and fast. The climbing wall was fun and scary and orienteering was fun but some people left our team because they wanted to leave. Our team building was fun and challenging because we had...

W.A.L.T   Describe our pet day. S.C. the reader understand my feelings about pet day   Today we had pet day it was exciting because we got to see all types of animals. all the animals they are so cute. I feel bad for the animals because they  would be crowded with all those people. there was a parred with all the dogs and puppies first it was the little dogs then it was the big dogs and there was some sheep 1 pig  but the rain came so we did not get to see some of the big dogs but them we went it the hall  and we got  to see some more animals. there was birds rats turtles blue tongue lizard cats. the is alexia dog       Name (Floyd)   he is a Labrador x rottweiler

17.11.16 WALT describe our feelings about camp. All the year five went on camp we went to woodend christian camp. Camp was brilliant because the water slide was really fun and you get to verse someone when you go down the waterside.            When you go down it is very steep then when you hit the middle and you get splashed and then when you are at the end there is a little mud puddle. At the end I like it because I got to race my friends and see  who was the fastest  and I like all the other activities  like archery because at the start I did not know what hand I was but then I got the hang of it.           Shooting was fun because I shoot got one of the triangles go karts was fun and fast. The  climbing wall was fun and scary and orienteering was fun but some people left our team because they wanted to leave our team building was fun and challenging bec...

                                                  Monday 10th October                  W.A.L.T persuade the reader to agree  with                                                               my opinion.                           Why  pigeons should not drive a bus                                           I think pigeons should not drive a bus because they do not have hands  or feet so it will be hard for them to drive. Because the pigeons do not have hands and  ...

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