pigeons persuasive writing

By Anonymous -
                                                  Monday 10th October

                  W.A.L.T persuade the reader to agree  with                                                               my opinion. 

                         Why  pigeons should not drive a bus                   


                       I think pigeons should not drive a bus because they do not have hands  or feet so it will be hard for them to drive. Because the pigeons do not have hands and  they can't steer the wheel I think the pigeons should not drive a bus because the pigeons do not have a a licence. It would also be tricky to find 
a seat that was not covered in pigeon poop too and if they wanted to go somewhere why don't they fly? and if they drive a bus they might crash. If they wanted to drive they could make a pigeons bus so they can get around with friends and family.

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